Good morning~
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear lei.
it's very cold today. it's recurrence of cold today. it's unnormal situation. normally it is warm enough to go out without warm clothes. but it's too cold to wear thin clothes. it must be the result of global warming. because of that the weather became so strange. refer to the cold weather, i feel so tired. so i couldn't study after work last night. as soon as i back home, i washed off my face and i fall in a sleep without taking a shower. because i was so tired that i couldn't take a shower. and also i woke up late this morning. i thought i might be absent, but i could come to work. as time passes i feel better. i wish it becomes warmer and warmer soon.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
You passed here a good composition. Most of your sentences are correct and some has minor lapses. Anyways, I agree that what is happening now with our weather is due to global warming. Just take care and take vitamin C for you not to catch a cold due to the inconsistent weather.
Lei J
Dear lei. >>correct
it's very cold today.
>>correct
it's recurrence of cold today.
>>The cold is recurring
it's unnormal situation.
>>it’s an abnormal situation
normally it is warm enough to go out without warm clothes.
>> normally it is warm enough to go out without wearing thick clothes.
but it's too cold to wear thin clothes.
>>correct
it must be the result of global warming.
>> it must be a result of global warming.
because of that the weather became so strange.
>>correct
refer to the cold weather, i feel so tired. so i couldn't study after work last night.
>>I am referring to the weather change. I felt so tired that I couldn’t study last night.
as soon as i back home, i washed my face and i fall in a sleep without taking a shower.
>>correct
because i was so tired that i couldn't take a shower.
>>I was so tired to take a shower
and also i woke up late this morning.
>>correct
i thought i might be absent, but i could come to work.
>>correct
as time passes i feel better. i wish it becomes warmer and warmer soon.
>>correct
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