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2010-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Lei.~ it had been snowing. the mountain is covered with snow. it's abnormal.!! anyway. it's warmer than yesterday. because it's not windy. today news is a first anniversary. we called it 'dol'.my close friend's daughter turns 1 year today. In Korea, we celebrate 100 days and first aniversary since baby was born. when baby turns 1 year old, we invite close person and have a party for congratulating the baby. and we have some institution of the party. father and mother will prepare twine,pencil, money(paper money), stethoscope, book, and so on. each one has meaning.

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Hi [이름]! Wow I am excited for you. As you know I am fond of babies because I am the youngest among my siblings. Have a great time in the party. Enjoy!! Lei J   Lei.~ it had been snowing. >>correct >>It had been snowing again (better) the mountain is covered with snow. >>correct it's abnormal.!! anyway. >>correct it's warmer than yesterday. >>correct because it's not windy. >>correct today news is a first anniversary. >>Today’s good news is about first anniversary we called it 'dol'.my close friend's daughter turns 1 year today. >>we call it ‘dol’. my close friend's daughter is turning 1 year old today. In Korea, we celebrate 100 days and first anniversary since baby was born. >> In Korea, we celebrate 100 days and first anniversary since the day the baby was born. when baby turns 1 year old, we invite close person and have a party for congratulating the baby. >> when baby turns 1 year old, we invite close friends and have a party to congratulate the baby. and we have some institution for the party. >>and we some traditions for the party The father and mother will prepare twine, pencil, money(paper money), stethoscope, book, and so on. >>correct each one has a meaning. >>correct>>each item symbolizes something

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