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2010-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Good morning. lei~ it's me. this moring, i was hard to get up. i wanted to take a rest at my home all day. but i have some tasks today. i woke up and came to work. In Korea, yesterday was windy day. cause of strong wind there were some damage such as broken windows and fallen signboards. and also it became chilly. it's unusually cold during april. my father told me about the cold during this spring. he said, the factor of mini glacial period. the south pole has have term of mini glacial period every 500 years. because of global warming it's not hard cold but it has strong cold until spring.

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Hi [이름]! Good morning!! It is my first time to hear about the mini glacial period. It is really helpful. Thank you. And most of your sentences today are great. Keep it up!! Lei J   Good morning. lei~>>correct it's me. >>correct this moring, i was hard to get up. >>I had a hard time getting up this morning i wanted to take a rest at my home all day. >>correct but i have some tasks today. >>correct i woke up and came to work. >>correctIn Korea, yesterday was windy day. >>In was windy in Korea yesterday cause of strong wind there were some damage such as broken windows and fallen signboards. \>>because of the strong wind, a lot of windows have broken and signboards has fallen and also it became chilly. >>correct it's unusually cold during april. >>correctmy father told me about the cold during this spring. >>correct he said, the factor of mini glacial period. >>he said, it is because of the mini glacial period the south pole has a term of mini glacial period every 500 years. >>correct because of global warming it's not hard cold but it has strong cold until spring. >>correct

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