Good morning.~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~
^ ^
as summer come and come, the sun rises earlier and earlier. this morning. suddenly i opened my eyes. because it's too bright i thought that might be wake up late! but it was 5:36 AM. inspite of i went to bed at around 12AM. because of that reason,i could wake up early today.
anyway. todays' news about wedding. my collegue just leaved my office. she used to work this branch until last year. but because of personnel changes, she went to another branch. i heard that she's going to get marry this saturday. she came to here to give a invitation. she is older than me. and another my coworker who is working at another part gave me a news too. she is also going to get marry this october! wow~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Wow it seems that you will be busy again this weekend because you’re going to attend your friend’s wedding. Who knows, you’ll be next. J Anyways, let talk about this later during our class. See yah!!
Lei J
Hi~^ ^ as summer come and come, the sun rises earlier and earlier.
>>as summer comes near, the sun rises earlier and earlier
this morning. suddenly i opened my eyes.
>>correct
because it's too bright i thought that might be wake up late!
>> because it's too bright i thought that I might have woken up late
but it was 5:36 AM.
>>correct
>>but it’s just 5:36 AM ( better )
inspite of i went to bed at around 12AM.
>>inspite the fact that I went to bed at around 12AM.
because of that reason,i could wake up early today. >>correct
anyway. todays' news about wedding.
>>anyways, today’s news is about weddings
my collegue just leaved my office.
>>my colleague just left the office
>>My collegue just resigned from my office
she used to work this branch until last year.
>> she used to work at our branch until last year.
but because of personnel changes, she went to another branch.
>>correct
i heard that she's going to get marry this saturday.
>> i heard that she's going to get married this Saturday
she came to here to give a invitation.
>>she came here to give me an invitation
she is older than me.
>>correct
and another my coworker who is working at another part gave me a news too.
>>correct
she is also going to get marry this october! wow~
>>she is also getting married this October!! Wow!!
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