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2012-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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We would like to talk about “Women and Sustainable development” related to eco-feminism. As we can see in mythology such as the earth-mother named Gaea, people in both western and eastern seem to have a tendency to think women as nature, bio-physical entities and men as culture, social entities. In that sense, eco-feminists suggest that there are important theoretical, historical, and empirical connections between how society treats women and how it treats the environment. It takes from the green movement a concern about the impact of human activities on the non-human world and from feminism the view of humanity as gendered in ways that subordinate, exploit and oppress women. Our team agrees with this opinion partially. It is really important change of perspective that satisfiying human‘s fundermental need and equal welfare is considered as main values of economy. Concept of labor before industrial society was indispensable acivities to human nature.

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Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today. I am very much curious about this forum that you\'re going to participate in. I hope that you can tell me more about it tomorrow. Take care and have a great time! T. JanE ^^ We would like to talk about “Women and Sustainable development” related to eco-feminism. >> Correct As we can see in mythology such as the earth-mother named Gaea, people in both western and eastern seem to have a tendency to think women as nature, bio-physical entities and men as culture, social entities.>> As we can see in mythology, such as Mother-Earth named Gaea, noth western and eastern people seem to have a tendency to think that women are natural bio-physical entities, while men are cultural and social entities.In that sense, eco-feminists suggest that there are important theoretical, historical, and empirical connections between how society treats women and how it treats the environment. >> Correct It takes from the green movement a concern about the impact of human activities on the non-human world and from feminism the view of humanity as gendered in ways that subordinate, exploit and oppress women. >> It takes a concern from the Green Movement about the impact of human activities on the non-human world, and from feminism, the view of humanity as gendered in ways that women are subordinate, exploited, and oppressed.Our team agrees with this opinion partially.>> Correct It is really important change of perspective that satisfiying human‘s fundermental need and equal welfare is considered as main values of economy. >> The change of perspective that satisfying human\'s fundamental needs and equal welfare is considered as the main values of economy.Concept of labor before industrial society was indispensable acivities to human nature. >> The concept of labor before the industrial society was an indispensable activity to human nature.

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