Good morning
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Jeny
It\'s Wenesday again. time too past
Have a good day.
1) She is graceful more than wacth in the movie.
2) Humans want to permanent life.
3) I try to generous person. but It\'s not easy.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jon,
I do believe that you are determined to enhance your abilities in English.
There were some mistakes but don\'t let those mistakes conquer your strength.
I hope that you will still continue to develop this way.
You can learn from this process.
See yourself as a person who will be successful. So don\'t pull yourself down I know you can do it!
^.^ Just keep it up!!
T. Jeny
>>correct
It\'s Wenesday again. time too past
It\'s Wenesday again. time too past
>>It\'s Wednesday again. Time is too fast.
Have a good day.
>>correct
1) She is graceful more than wacth in the movie.
Have a good day.
>>correct
1) She is graceful more than wacth in the movie.
>> She is more graceful than in the movie.
2) Humans want to permanent life.
2) Humans want to permanent life.
>>Humans want to have permanent life.
3) I try to generous person. but It\'s not easy.
3) I try to generous person. but It\'s not easy.
>>I try to be a generous person, but it\'s not easy.
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