Good morning
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Jeny
Happy mooday again!!!
1) These days peeple wants well-being life.
2) Conversation is very important in our life
3) The result reward for patience
강사 첨삭
Hello Jon!!!!
Thank you for your homework, you were able to express your thoughts and opinions. Great job!!!
I know that learning is a challenge but you just have to do your best in order for you to be successful
T. Jeny
Hi, Jen
>>correct
Happy mooday again!!!
>>Happy Monday again!!!
1) These days peeple wants well-being life.
>>These days people want to have a well-being life.
2) Conversation is very important in our life
>>Conversation is very important in our lives.
3) The result reward for patience
>>He was rewarded for his patience.
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