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i heard that there is most beautiful place in Ko-Je. ko -je is a second large island in Korea. it is famous for beautiful sea and it has two big ship building company. i lived in Ko-Je for 3 years. but i haven't been there during the time. when i reached Gonggo-ji i couldn't believe my eyes. there are fill with yellow daffodils and the sea was very clear so i could see under water. i want to be saw it to you. after then i went to see a movie which be released as 3D, TITAN. have you heard about it? it was not satisfied but it was good experience for me.

Hi [이름], Good afternoon! Here are your corrections: >>>i heard that there is most beautiful place in Ko-Je. >>>I heard that there was this most beautiful place in Ko-je./ I heard that the most beautiful place was in Ko-je. >>>ko -je is a second large island in Korea. >>>Ko-je is the second largest island in Korea. >>>it is famous for beautiful sea and it has two big ship building company. >>>It is famous for the beautiful sea and it has two big ship building companies. >>>i lived in Ko-Je for 3 years. but i haven't been there during the time. >>>I have lived in Ko-je for 3 years but I haven't been  to that beautiful place during my 3 year-stay. >>>when i reached Gonggo-ji i couldn't believe my eyes. >>>Correct. Better: When I reached Gonggo-ji, I couldn't believe my eyes! >>>there are fill with yellow daffodils and the sea was very clear so i could see under water. >>>The land was filled with yellow daffodils and the sea was very clear that I could even see through the water. >>>i want to be saw it to you. >>>I wanted to show it to you. >>>after then i went to see a movie which be released as 3D, TITAN. >>>After that, I went to see a movie entitled TITAN which was released in 3D >>>have you heard about it? >>>Have you heard about that? >>>it was not satisfied but it was good experience for me >>>It was not satisfying but it was a good experience for me.