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2010-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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twine means having a long life, pencil means to be a smart, money means to be a rich, strethoscope means to be a doctor, book means to be a scholar. during the party we have a event for this. baby choice one of those thing. and according to the babys' choice we can expect what the baby will do in the future. we called it 'dol jap-i" it means choice of the first anniversary. and for attend the party, i will back home early. maybe i could reach my home around 12 :30 pm. see you our class. and discuss about this. ~

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twine means having a long life, >>correct >>twine symbolizes long life (better) pencil means to be a smart, >>pencil is for the baby to be smart money means to be a rich, >>correct strethoscope means to be a doctor, >>stethoscope means the baby will become a doctor book means to be a scholar. >>correct >>book in order for the baby to become a scholar (better) during the party we have a event for this. >>during the party we have an event for this baby choice one of those thing. >>the baby will choose one of this things and according to the babys' choice we can expect what the baby will do in the future. >>correct we called it 'dol jap-i" it means choice of the first anniversary. >>we call it ‘dol jap-I” It means, baby’s choice during her/his first anniversary and for attend the party, i will back home early. >>in order for me to attend the party, I need to go home early maybe i could reach my home around 12 :30 pm. >> maybe i could reach my home at around 12 :30 pm. see you our class. and discuss about this. ~ >>see you in our class and let’s discuss about this

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