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2010-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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we talked about the time which we didn't meet and also about her plan for the dream. she went to another province this early morning. she gave me a regards when she depart from her home.it was 5am. i woke up at that time for study. when she got the reply from me she looked like suprised because it's early time. anyways i hope to her's succeed with all my heart. on parting with her, my another friend came to see me at the icecream shop. we went to starbucks and we had a chat. on the way home we dropped to the supermarket. i bought some ingredients of spagetti. i cooked white cream spagetti and garlic spagetti. but sadly, it was not good. ㅠ ㅠ i will try it again.

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we talked about the time which we didn't meet and also about her plan for the dream. >>we talked about the past times and about her plans to reach her dreams she went to another province this early morning. >>she went to another province early this morning she gave me a regards when she depart from her home. >>correct it was 5am. i woke up at that time for study. >>it was 5 am and I was awake that time for my studies when she got the reply from me she looked like suprised because it's early time. >>when she received my reply she was quite surprised because it’s still early anyways i hope to her's succeed with all my heart.>>I wish her to be successful from the bottom of my heart on parting with her, my another friend came to see me at the icecream shop. >>after parting with her, my other friend came to see me at the ice cream shop we went to Starbucks and we had a chat. >>correct on the way home we dropped to the supermarket. >>on our way home we dropped to the supermarket i bought some ingredients of spagetti. >> i bought some ingredients of spaghetti. i cooked white cream spaghetti and garlic spaghetti. >>correct but sadly, it was not good. ㅠ ㅠ >>correct i will try it again.>>correct

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