Good morning!!

2013-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Good morning! Chloe. I am used to exercising in early morning. My feeling is very well. You know I met myboyfriend last night. I was falling love again. He was wearing a fit shirt. I like to slim body like him. Now He is in the middle of interview. I know he will pass the interview. Anyway, I havn't ever donate my boby or organ. But I did blood for fransfusuion once time. When I bornd my mother recived alot of blood because she did caesarean operation. So I want to help another people such as my mother. But I don't do it againg because I was very sick after doing it. Anyway, See you later. Have a nice day!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

Good morning, too^^

Good for you that you get to have time to exercise.

I think it will do you good if you are fit.

Living healthy is a good way to live life to the fullest.

It is not just by donating where you can help others.

You can help them in many ways.

Have a nice day, too.

See you later!

T. Chloe

 Good morning! Chloe.

>> Correct
I am used to exercising in early morning.

>> I am used to exercising early in the morning.
My feeling is very well.

>> I feel very well.
You know I met my boyfriend last night.

>> Correct
I was falling love again.

>> Correct
He was wearing a fit shirt.

>> He was wearing a fitted shirt.

I like to slim body like him.

>> I like to have a slim body like him.
Now He is in the middle of interview.

>> He is now in a middle of an interview.

I know he will pass the interview.

>> Correct
Anyway, I havn\'t ever donate my boby or organ.

>> Anyways, I haven\'t donated any parts or my body nor any of my organs.
But I did blood for fransfusuion once time.

>> But I did a blood transfusion one time.
When I bornd my mother recived alot of blood because she did caesarean operation.

>> When I was born, my mother received a lot of blood because she had me via cesarean section.
So I want to help another people such as my mother.

>> That is why I want to help other people such as my mother.
But I don\'t do it againg because I was very sick after doing it.

>> But I think I am not going to do it again because I was so sick after.
Anyway, See you later.

>> Correct

Have a nice day!!

>> Correct

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