Good morning!!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
You never fail to make me smile by just posting your work on our composition board.
Keep on writing!
Here is a quote that may inspire you:
\"The more you enjoy putting in good efforts, the greater will be your happiness on receiving the fruits of those efforts.\"
Keep up the good job!
Hellow, Happy Wednesday.
>>Hello! Happy Wednesday!^^
Wow, I am so tired but I wake up ealry and did yoga.
>>Wow! I am so tired but I woke up early and did yoga.
I think if I have an 48hours in a day. I could spend time more effective.
>>I think if I have 48 hours in a day, I can spend my time more effectively.
Yesterday, I was angry with me because I want to study more but I couldn\'t.
I was very tired so I coudn\'t fouce on it.
>>Yesterday, I was angry at myself because I wanted to study more but I couldn\'t. I was very tired so I couldn\'t focus on my studies.
Today, I will do it that I plannd it.
>>Today, I will do it as I planned.
Have a great day and I will prepare our book.
>>Correct
We need to study with our book.
>>Correct
OR >> We need to study the lessons in our book.
See you soon!!
>>Correct!
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