Good morning!!

2013-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Hellow, Happy Wednesday. Wow, I am so tired but I wake up ealry and did yoga. I think if I have an 48hours in a day. I could spend time more effective. Yesterday, I was angry with me because I want to study more but I couldn't. I was very tired so I coudn't fouce on it. Today, I will do it that I plannd it. Have a great day and I will prepare our book. We need to study with our book. See you soon!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there!
You never fail to make me smile by just posting your work on our composition board.
Keep on writing!
Here is a quote that may inspire you:
\"The more you enjoy putting in good efforts, the greater will be your happiness on receiving the fruits of those efforts.\"
Keep up the good job!

Hellow, Happy Wednesday.

>>Hello! Happy Wednesday!^^
Wow, I am so tired but I wake up ealry and did yoga.

>>Wow! I am so tired but I woke up early and did yoga.
I think if I have an 48hours in a day.
I could spend time more effective.

>>I think if I have 48 hours in a day, I can spend my time more effectively.
Yesterday, I was angry with me because I want to study more but I couldn\'t.
I was very tired so I coudn\'t fouce on it.

>>Yesterday, I was angry at myself because I wanted to study more but I couldn\'t. I was very tired so I couldn\'t focus on my studies.
Today, I will do it that I plannd it.

>>Today, I will do it as I planned.
Have a great day and I will prepare our book.

>>Correct
We need to study with our book.

>>Correct

OR >> We need to study the lessons in our book.
See you soon!!

>>Correct!

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