Good morning!!

2013-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello! I am so happy because Today is the last day to work. The weather is great. I like to summer season. And I also have a great news. I lose weight 1kg. That is my effort that I do exercise every morning and reduce food. Anyway Have a great day and this is my homework. 1. This is the man I was speaking for. 2. Where is the knife I usually sharpen my pencils about? 3. I wonder what she is dressing up with? 4.We don't know what he is hinting for. 5. Who is he angry for? Is he complaining at her again ?

강사 첨삭

Hi there!! Good morning.

I hope everything is doing fine for you.

I\'m very happy too because we will have a long vacation.

Wow! It\'s nice to know that your effort in exercising and reducing your diet paid off.

Anyway, thank you for making and sending your homework.

Please review the corrections if you have time.

I will see you in the next class.

Take care.

~T. Chloe

Hello!

>> CORRECT!!

I am so happy because Today is the last day to work.

>> Correct

OR >> I am so happy because it\'s the last work-day of the week.

The weather is great.

>>  CORRECT!!

I like to summer season.

>> I like the Summer season.

And I also have a great news.

>>  CORRECT!!

I lose weight 1kg.

>> I lost 1 kg.^^  

That is my effort that I do exercise every morning and reduce food.

>> That is because of my diet and I exercise every morning.

Anyway Have a great day and this is my homework.

>> Anyway, have a great day and here is my homework.

1. This is the man I was speaking for.
>> with
2. Where is the knife I usually sharpen my pencils about?
>> with
3. I wonder what she is dressing up with?
>> for
4.We don\'t know what he is hinting for.
>> at

5. Who is he angry for? Is he complaining at her again ?

>> at (with), about

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