Good morning.

2013-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi! Chloe. I am not feeling well. I had some trouble to wake up ealry this morning. But I did a exercise. Yesterday I went to the see my elder sister and I have to take care of her son. He is very powful and curious all of things. He will be stay for one week at my home. Yesterday, I said that I want to marry you next spring to my boyfriend. But I rejected because he said to me that time is so fast to make a money. So I said that to make more money is very difficult. He is opinion that He want to marry me when he earn alot of momey. I don't know how can I solve this problem. I will try to read some guide book. kkk See you soon. Have a nice day!! Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

Take some more rest.^^

It\'s good that your nephew is with you.

He will take most of your time so you will not worry about your problem.

But for me I think, you both need to think it over.

It sounds great that you both want to get married.

Still though, talk with your boyfriend so that you can both sort this out.

Have a great day!

See you later and we will talk more about your dilemma.

T. Chloe^^

 Hi! Chloe.

>> Correct
I am not feeling well.

>> Correct
I had some trouble to wake up ealry this morning.

>>I had some troubles waking up early this morning.
But I did a exercise.

>> But I did exercise.

>> But I exercised.
Yesterday I went to the see my elder sister and I have to take care of her son.

>> Yesterday, I went to see my elder sister because I have to take care of her son.
He is very powful and curious all of things.

>> He is a very powerful and curious kid.
He will be stay for one week at my home.

>> He will be staying with me for a week.
Yesterday, I said that I want to marry you next spring to my boyfriend.

>> Yesterday, I told you that I want to marry my boyfriend next spring.

But I rejected because he said to me that time is so fast to make a money.

>> But I rejected the idea because he told me that we need to earn money fast until that time.
So I said that to make more money is very difficult.

>> So I said that it is hard to make money.
He is opinion that He want to marry me when he earn alot of momey.

>> His opinion is that he wants to marry me when he earns a lot of money.
I don\'t know how can I solve this problem.

>> I don\'t know how to solve this problem.
I will try to read some guide book. kkk

>> Correct
See you soon. Have a nice day!!

>> Correct
Thank you!

>> Correct

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