Good Morning!

2013-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Mona

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Good morning! Chloe!! I am so happy because I have a plan for my future. I didn't think about my dream after getting job. I don't have any confidence at my qulity. I was tried to live nomal to fit my life. But I suddenly think about my dream. That's why I am planning to study more. I have a goal so I wil run best I can do. It's difficult to be a teacher or to teach for student but I don't give up anymore. Thank you so much Chloe! You can engage myself!! Have a nice day! today is TGIF!! See you at night!

강사 첨삭

Hi!

Good job!

I admire your determination in reaching your goals or your dreams. 

Move on with that positive attitude and I know you\'ll reach what you are dreaming of. 

^_^

Good morning! Chloe!!
I am so happy because I have a plan for my future.

>>I am so happy because I have plans for my future.
I didn\'t think about my dream after getting job.

>>Correct ^_^
I don\'t have any confidence at my qulity.

>>I don\'t have any confidence in my qualities.
I was tried to live nomal to fit my life.

>>I tried to live normal for myself.
But I suddenly think about my dream. That\'s why I am planning to study more.

>>CORRECT ^_^
I have a goal so I wil run best I can do.

>>I have a goal so I will run to reach it as fast as I can.
It\'s difficult to be a teacher or to teach for student but I don\'t give up anymore.

>>It\'s difficult to be a teacher or to teach students but I won\'t give up.

Thank you so much Chloe!

>>CORRECT ^_^
You can engage myself!!
>>You know me very well!

Have a nice day! today is TGIF!!

>>CORRECT ^_^
See you at night!

>>See you tonight!

 

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