Good morning~
학생이 쓴 원문
Good mornign jenny~
I heard it will be snowy day in seoul. was it snowing? contrast with seoul here is warmer than seoul. did i tell you? my home is located near Busan. so it will be rainy holiday in tong-yeong. Tong - yeong is my hometown which is famous as beautiful seaside. I hope to finish my work earlier than yesterday. Actually I hope to go home about 1 PM. but there was no message about finishing time on the board. According to the rumor, The CEO said "everyone have to work until 5 PM. " if i can go home early, i will change my hairdo. and I am going to study English during holiday. will you wish for that i could keep up with my plan.~
have a great holiday. ~
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Hi!
Yeah, I heard it was snowing in Seoul today. One of my students told me.
You might have mentioned that your hometown was near Busan but I am not
sure if you told me that it was in Tong-yeong. Anyway, it is nice to know that
you live in an amazing town. I wish I could live near the sea, too.
Be safe and have a great weekend! ^^
XOXO.Jenny.
Here is the correction:
Good mornign jenny~
>>Good morning, Jenny.
I heard it will be snowy day in seoul.
>> I heard it will be a snowy day in Seoul.
was it snowing?
>> Is it snowing?
contrast with seoul here is warmer than seoul.
>> In contrast with Seoul, it is warmer in here.
did i tell you? my home is located near Busan.
>> Did I tell you that my home is located near Busan?
so it will be rainy holiday in tong-yeong.
>> So it will be a rainy holiday in Tong-yeong.
Tong - yeong is my hometown which is famous as beautiful seaside.
>> Tong-yeong is my hometown and it is famous for its beautiful seaside.
I hope to finish my work earlier than yesterday.
>> I hope I can finish my work earlier than yesterday.
Actually I hope to go home about 1 PM.
>> Actually, I hope to go home at around 1 PM.
but there was no message about finishing time on the board.
>>But, there was no notice written on the bulletin board about the end time of work today.
According to the rumor, The CEO said "everyone have to work until 5 PM. "
>> According to rumors, the CEO said, “Everyone has to work until 5 PM.”
if i can go home early, i will change my hairdo.
>> If I can leave the office early, I want to change my hairdo.
and I am going to study English during holiday.
>> I am going to study English during the holidays also.
will you wish for that i could keep up with my plan.~
>> Correct.// Will you wish that I could keep up with my plan?
Have a great holiday.
>> Correct.
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