Good morning~

2010-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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Good mornign jenny~ I heard it will be snowy day in seoul. was it snowing? contrast with seoul here is warmer than seoul. did i tell you? my home is located near Busan. so it will be rainy holiday in tong-yeong. Tong - yeong is my hometown which is famous as beautiful seaside. I hope to finish my work earlier than yesterday. Actually I hope to go home about 1 PM. but there was no message about finishing time on the board. According to the rumor, The CEO said "everyone have to work until 5 PM. " if i can go home early, i will change my hairdo. and I am going to study English during holiday. will you wish for that i could keep up with my plan.~ have a great holiday. ~

강사 첨삭

[이름], Hi! Yeah, I heard it was snowing in Seoul today. One of my students told me. You might have mentioned that your hometown was near Busan but I am not sure if you told me that it was in Tong-yeong. Anyway, it is nice to know that you live in an amazing town.  I wish I could live near the sea, too. Be safe and have a great weekend! ^^ XOXO.Jenny.   Here is the correction:   Good mornign jenny~ >>Good morning, Jenny. I heard it will be snowy day in seoul. >> I heard it will be a snowy day in Seoul.  was it snowing? >> Is it snowing? contrast with seoul here is warmer than seoul. >> In contrast with Seoul, it is warmer in here. did i tell you? my home is located near Busan. >> Did I tell you that my home is located near Busan? so it will be rainy holiday in tong-yeong. >> So it will be a rainy holiday in Tong-yeong. Tong - yeong is my hometown which is famous as beautiful seaside. >> Tong-yeong is my hometown and it is famous for its beautiful seaside.  I hope to finish my work earlier than yesterday. >> I hope I can finish my work earlier than yesterday.  Actually I hope to go home about 1 PM. >> Actually, I hope to go home at around 1 PM. but there was no message about finishing time on the board. >>But, there was no notice written on the bulletin board about the end time of work today. According to the rumor, The CEO said "everyone have to work until 5 PM. " >> According to rumors, the CEO said, “Everyone has to work until 5 PM.”  if i can go home early, i will change my hairdo. >> If I can leave the office early, I want to change my hairdo. and I am going to study English during holiday. >> I am going to study English during the holidays also.  will you wish for that i could keep up with my plan.~ >> Correct.// Will you wish that I could keep up with my plan? Have a great holiday. >> Correct.

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