good morning~

2011-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Geiz

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i woke up at 8:00 because my friend called to me. she talked me that shs will go to japan with her boy friend. and she was in airport. i said to her " why did you call me this early time?" and she said, " actually it is my first trip to go abroad. so i don't know how to do when i arrive in japan." i explained about immigration. and...she leave from korea......bye~hahaha:)

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i woke up at 8:00 because my friend called to me.
>>I woke up at 8:00 because my friend called me.
she talked me that shs will go to japan with her boy friend. and she was in airport.
>>She told me that she'll go to Japan with her boyfriend and now, she is in the airport.
i said to her " why did you call me this early time?" and she said, " actually it is my first trip to go abroad. so i don't know how to do when i arrive in japan."
>>I said to her, " why did you call me this early?" and she said, "actually it is my first trip to go abroad so I don't know how to do things when I arrive in Japan."
i explained about immigration. and...she leave from korea......bye~hahaha:)
>>I explained about the immigration and she left Korea.

Goodbye!

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