Good morning :)

2011-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning teacher. =) It's really nice to meet you. I'm feeling good today, as your voice make me feel better. Anyways, my voice isn't young. it may be because of I just got up. I surprised to hear your sleep time. You are a morning person. I envy you and I respect you.kk Oh.. I'm gonna prepare to go to school in hurry. Have a great day :)

강사 첨삭

Hi there Miss [이름]!! It was also a pleasure meeting you. I had fun during our first class. Even this was the first time

we talked, you were able to connect wth me and tried hard to express yourself. That made me happy. ^_^ I  am alos glad that I made you glad just hearing my voice. You did the same!! Anyways, I hope we are going to have fun while we study together! 

 

By the way here are the minor corrections of your composition. Have time to read them:

 

Good morning teacher. =)

>> corrrect

>> or: Greetings Teacher!
It's really nice to meet you.

>> correct:
>> I뭢 pleased to meet you.

I'm feeling good today, as your voice make me feel better.

>> I뭢 feelig good today but your voice made me feel better.
Anyways, my voice isn't young. it may be because of I just got up.

>> Anyways, my voive isn뭪 young. It뭩 because I just got up.
I surprised to hear your sleep time.

>> I뭢 surprised when you told me about your sleeping time.
You are a morning person. I envy you and I respect you.kk

>> You are an early bird since you wake u early too. I envy and I respect you.kk
Oh.. I'm gonna prepare to go to school in hurry.

>> Oh..I have to prepare for school already.

>> I shouls hurry for school.

 

Have a great day :)

 

HAVE A GREAT DAY TOO!!

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