Good morning.
학생이 쓴 원문
Did you have a good weekend?
I went to see a doctor with my children because my children caught a cold.
On Sunday, I worked many housework again.
Here is my homework.
Q: The government should pay for colleges and universities-education should be free for everybody.?
I want really it.
Many students of Korea want to learn in College.
They have to pay their college tuition to learn in College.
However, it is not easy because college tuition is very expensive.
While many students are learning in their College, they are working part time job for college tuition.
Even, they loan some money to bank for their college tuition.
So they don't have time to study and they have a lot of loan.
I am sorry about that.
I hope that the government must find way to pay free.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
I really hope that you and your daughters will be better soon.
Being a mother is really difficult. But, I know and I believe that
you are a good mother to your family. I salute all mothers by the way.
That is why I salute you. ^^
Thank you for making your homework. I like your opinion on this.
You are right that the government must put an action on this matter since
the students are becoming stressed and pitiful because of their works.
Anyway, [이름], I really appreciate your effort in making your homework.
Take care and see you! ^^
~~Teacher Kris
I want really it.
>> I really want it.Many students of Korea want to learn in College.
>> Correct
They have to pay their college tuition to learn in College.
>> CorrectHowever, it is not easy because college tuition is very expensive.
>> CorrectWhile many students are learning in their College, they are working part time job for college tuition.
>> While many students are learning in their College, they are working for part time jobs to pay their college tuition.Even, they loan some money to bank for their college tuition.
>> They even loan some money from the bank for their college tuition.So they don\'t have time to study and they have a lot of loan.
>> So, they don\'t have time to study and they have a lot of loan.I am sorry about that.
>> I feel sorry about that.I hope that the government must find way to pay free.
>> I hope that the government will find ways to pay for the tuition of the students.
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