good morning~

2011-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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did you sleep good? yesterday, i was so tired, and i went to bed at 11 pm. i usually go to bed at 12 a clock. i started group study for my major with my class mates yesterday. i've never done before. but the book is written in english and the content is very difficult for us. actually, the book is written easier than other major book. but i feel scare the book just written in english. so we interpreted one chapter and we found that if we studied like this, our english skill improve. i will do my best for my english skill :) thank you:)

강사 첨삭

Hahaha…. I like it this way, [이름]. Post your composition before our class. I prefer it this way. Hmm… Studying with a group is effective in a way that you could discuss things related to the subject. Brainstorming is one of the effective tools in learning. There are things that you know but your colleagues may not know and vice-versa. Group study is good but you more time to study alone. ^^ Oh! I can answer your question now… kkk^^… I want to go back to the graduate school and continue my Master’s degree in Teaching. Have a beautiful Thursday today!   did you sleep good? >>Did you have a good sleep last night? yesterday, i was so tired, and i went to bed at 11 pm. >>Yesterday, I was so tired and went to bed early. i usually go to bed at 12 a clock. >>Though I usually go to bed at 12:00 o’clock. i started group study for my major with my class mates yesterday. >>I started a group study for my major with my classmates yesterday. i've never done before. >>I’ve never done this before. but the book is written in english and the content is very difficult for us. >>The book that we were studying is written in English and the content was difficult for us to understand. actually, the book is written easier than other major book. >>It seems easier to understand than the other major book, though. but i feel scare the book just written in english. >>Maybe because I just got carried away in pressuring myself upon knowing that we will study with an English book. so we interpreted one chapter and we found that if we studied like this, our english skill improve. >>Nevertheless, we were able to interpret one chapter and finally found out that studying that way is a good practice for us in improving our skills in English. i will do my best for my english skill :) >>I will do my best for my English skill! thank you:) >>Thank you.  

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