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2011-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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the day before yesterday, the stalker came to my school finally. he had sent messages, but i didn't realize that because he's message was spam. that day, after my academy, i found his message. but i didn't want to meet him. he called me saveral time but i didn't get a call as usual. after my classes, i found another messages. he siad " i really wanted to meet you. but i think you are so busy, isn't it? i will leave this message in your major office." when i had recieved this message, i was really embarrassed. and i haven't gone the office yet. my friends who knew this story make me pick up the letter. so yesterday, i was about to go to affice, but i couldn't remember that on account of my busy schedule. see you!

강사 첨삭

Hello troubled [이름]. I am not comfortable with your situation right now. This is the time where friends are badly needed especially your male friends. Do the conspiracy with your male friend. Be alert always. (Sigh) Please be careful. Praying for your safety, T. Joanna   the day before yesterday, the stalker came to my school finally. >>The other day, the stalker finally came to my school. he had sent messages, but i didn't realize that because he's message was spam. >>He sent messages beforehand, but I didn’t notice them because they were spam. that day, after my academy, i found his message. but i didn't want to meet him. he called me saveral time but i didn't get a call as usual. >>On that day, I read his message after my academy time. I never wished to meet him. He called me several times but I didn’t dare answer of those calls. after my classes, i found another messages. he siad " i really wanted to meet you. but i think you are so busy, isn't it? i will leave this message in your major office." >>After my classes, I got another message. It says, “I really want to meet. But it seems you are so busy, aren’t you? I will leave this note at your major office.” when i had recieved this message, i was really embarrassed. and i haven't gone the office yet. >>When I received the message, I felt embarrassed. I didn’t move out from the office at once. my friends who knew this story make me pick up the letter. >>My friends who knows the story pushed me to pick the letter up. so yesterday, i was about to go to affice, but i couldn't remember that on account of my busy schedule. >>Yesterday, I was about to go to the office but I forgot to, maybe because of my busy schedule. see you! >>See you!

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