good morning!
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm really sorry :(
today morning, my alram didn't work.:(
so i woke up at 9:00 am.
(last night i went to bed at 10:00 pm...;;)
as you know, i had been really tired of my presentation.
and my presentation didn't satisfied me.......:(((((((((((((
this weekend, i will study english that i couldn't do .
actually, i could't go to academy about two days, because i woke up at late time.
i will gather heart!
sorry, and thank you for your consideration!
have a nice weekend!
강사 첨삭
Oh, dear [이름].
All your hard works will lead you to your success. It may not be as quick as now but it will be in the future. Don’t push yourself too much. Take things easy. Dream, plan and do it. It will be easier for you.
Enjoy this coming weekend. Give yourself a break.
Have a stress free weekend!
It’s me,
T. Joanna
I'm really sorry :(
>>correct
>>I am really sorry.today morning, my alram didn't work.:(
>>This morning, my alarm didn’t work.so i woke up at 9:00 am.
>>So I woke up 9:00 am late.(last night i went to bed at 10:00 pm...;;)
>>Last night, I went to bed at 10:00pm.
>>I went to bed at 10:00 late last night.as you know, i had been really tired of my presentation.
>>As you know, I have been really tired in preparing my presentation.and my presentation didn't satisfied me.......:(((((((((((((>>And I am not satisfied with the outcome of my presentation.this weekend, i will study english that i couldn't do .
>>This weekend, I will study English that I couldn’t do while preparing the presentation.actually, i could't go to academy about two days, because i woke up at late time.>>In fact, I didn’t even attend my classes in the academy for two straight days.i will gather heart!>> (What do you mean in here?)sorry, and thank you for your consideration!
>>Sorry. And I thank you for your consideration.have a nice weekend!
>>Have a nice weekend!
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