Good morning.~

2010-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi. Lei~ it's a brandnew day. did you have a breakfast? i remember that you wake up about 4 am in Korea time. you need to have a breakfast everyday. because you spend your energy from early morning to afternoon. take care yourslef.~ i had a breakfast this morning. i have a breakfast every morning at my company. yesterday, i studied about 5 hours. i achieved my goal. but for study i went to bed late than usual i feel tired this morning. but i prefer self confidence that i kept my plan for the first day than physical comfortant. i couldn't wait for our class. ^ ^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! I am really glad that you are studying English and taking it seriously. That is the attitude needed in order for you to learn about this language effectively. I know that it is quite tiring but you can do it. Just keep it up. Lei J   Hi. Lei~it's a brand new day. >>correct did you have a breakfast? >>correct i remember that you wake up about 4 am in Korea time. >>I remember that you wake up at around 4 am Korean time you need to have a breakfast everyday. >>correct because you spend your energy from early morning to afternoon. >>because you need to have energy for the whole day take care yourslef.~ >>take care of yourself i had a breakfast this morning. >>correct i have a breakfast every morning at my company. >>I am having my breakfast at my compny every morning yesterday, i studied about 5 hours. >>yesterday, I studied for about 5 hours i achieved my goal. >>correct but for study i went to bed late than usual i feel tired this morning. >>Because of that, I went to bed later than usual that’s why I feel tired this morning but i prefer self confidence that i kept my plan for the first day than physical comfortant. >>But I feel confident to rather keep up with my plan than having physical comfort i couldn't wait for our class. ^ ^ >>correct

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