Good morning.~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi. Lei~
it's a brandnew day. did you have a breakfast? i remember that you wake up about 4 am in Korea time. you need to have a breakfast everyday. because you spend your energy from early morning to afternoon. take care yourslef.~ i had a breakfast this morning. i have a breakfast every morning at my company.
yesterday, i studied about 5 hours. i achieved my goal. but for study i went to bed late than usual i feel tired this morning. but i prefer self confidence that i kept my plan for the first day than physical comfortant. i couldn't wait for our class. ^ ^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
I am really glad that you are studying English and taking it seriously. That is the attitude needed in order for you to learn about this language effectively. I know that it is quite tiring but you can do it. Just keep it up.
Lei J
Hi. Lei~it's a brand new day.
>>correct
did you have a breakfast?
>>correct
i remember that you wake up about 4 am in Korea time.
>>I remember that you wake up at around 4 am Korean time
you need to have a breakfast everyday.
>>correct
because you spend your energy from early morning to afternoon.
>>because you need to have energy for the whole day
take care yourslef.~
>>take care of yourself
i had a breakfast this morning.
>>correct
i have a breakfast every morning at my company.
>>I am having my breakfast at my compny every morning
yesterday, i studied about 5 hours.
>>yesterday, I studied for about 5 hours
i achieved my goal.
>>correct
but for study i went to bed late than usual i feel tired this morning.
>>Because of that, I went to bed later than usual that’s why I feel tired this morning
but i prefer self confidence that i kept my plan for the first day than physical comfortant.
>>But I feel confident to rather keep up with my plan than having physical comfort
i couldn't wait for our class. ^ ^
>>correct
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