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2010-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

Lei. i startled at my composition. it gone away!. yesterday morning, i wrote about fool's day. but i couldn't find my composition. there was must something wrong. maybe i didn't click the ok. ㅠ ㅠ yesterday was fool's day. In Korea, it's the day allowed to make a joke. and people give each other some joke. just like, "there is something on your shoulder. so you need to take off it from your shoulder." how about it in your country? you are also cerebrate the fool's day?

강사 첨삭

  Hi [이름]! We don’t celebrate April fool’s day in as much as you guys do, but I can see that ir is very exciting and I wish that we could do that too. Anyway, fool’s day is celebrated here everyday, haha! Lei. i startled at my composition. it gone away!. >>>Lei, I started my composition but it’s gone!  yesterday morning, i wrote about fool's day. but i couldn't find my composition. there was must something wrong. maybe i didn't click the ok. ㅠ ㅠ >>>Yesterday morning, I wrote about April fool’s day, but I couldn’t find my composition. There must  have been something wrong. Maybe I didn’t click the OK button.yesterday was fool's day. In Korea, it's the day allowed to make a joke. and people give each other some joke. >>> Yesterday was fool's day. In Korea, it's the day that people are allowed to make jokes, and people give each other some jokes.  just like, "there is something on your shoulder. so you need to take off it from your shoulder >>>Just like, for example, "there is something on your shoulder, so you need to take off it from your shoulder." how about it in your country? you are also cerebrate the fool's day? >>>How about in your country? Do you also celebrate the fool’s day?

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