Good morning~
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning teacher,
I should get up early to take your call every morning.
I think this is not only a good habit, but also happiness for me.
When we were talking on the telephone, you asked me the event that our warship is lost with a lot of hands.
Unfortunitly, we couldn't fine the reason why the warship is lost.
All of people including me is sorrow over their death.
To make matters worse, a few crew and diver is lost their life to carry out a search-and-rescue work.
After a few minute, it is time to talk with you.
Have a nice day and take care!
강사 첨삭
Hi there! Thank you for writng here and indeed, we share the same insights on war and the irrevocable damage on human lives. See you in class tomorrow! =)
Good morning teacher,I should get up early to take your call every morning.I think this is not only a good habit, but also happiness for me.
>>>Correct
>>>OR I think this is not only a good habit, but also a good source of happiness for me.When we were talking on the telephone, you asked me the event thatour warship is lost with a lot of hands.
>>> When we were talking on the telephone, you asked me the event that war is lost with a lot of hands.
Unfortunitly, we couldn't fine the reason why the warship is lost.
>>>Unfortunately, we culdn’t find the reason why wars won’t stop.All of people including me is sorrow over their death.
>>>All people including myself is sorrowful over the death of people during war.To make matters worse, a few crew and diver is lost their life to carry out a search-and-rescue work.
>>>To make matters worse, a few crew and divers lose their lives to carry out search- and- rescue work.After a few minute, it is time to talk with you. Have a nice day and take care!
>>>Correct
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