Good morning.~

2010-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 janel

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lei.~ i didn't know that April first was holiday in The Philippines. so i waited your call. but don't worry about it. after i got the message from site manager, i knew it. how about your holiday? did you enjoy it? for me, it was fantastic days. On Saturday, i went to GongGo - ji which is famous for daffodil flower and seaside. it's not far from my house. i knew about the place before.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

I뭠l tell you about it when we get to talk.

Here are your corrections:

>>>i didn't know that April first was holiday in The Philippines. 
>>>so i waited your call. 
>>>but don't worry about it. 
>>>after i got the message from site manager, i knew it.
>>>how about your holiday? did you enjoy it? 
>>>for me, it was fantastic days. 
>>>On Saturday, i went to GongGo - ji which is famous for daffodil flower and seaside. 
>>>it's not far from my house. 
>>>i knew about the place before.

>>>I didn't know that April 1st was considered a holiday in the Philippines.

>>>So I waited for your call.

>>>Anyway, don't worry about that.

>>>I knew about it after I got the message from the/your site manager.

>>>How was your holiday?

>>>Correct.

>>>For me, it was a fantastic day. / For me, those were fantastic days.

>>>On Saturday, i went to GongGo - ji which is famous for its daffodil flowers and seaside.

>>>Correct.

>>>Correct. Better>>>I've heard of the place before.

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