Good morning.~
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Hi [이름]!
I뭠l tell you about it when we get to talk.
Here are your corrections:
>>>i didn't know that April first was holiday in The
Philippines.
>>>so i waited your call.
>>>but don't worry about it.
>>>after i got the message from site manager, i knew it.
>>>how about your holiday? did you enjoy it?
>>>for me, it was fantastic days.
>>>On Saturday, i went to GongGo - ji which is famous for daffodil
flower and seaside.
>>>it's not far from my house.
>>>i knew about the place before.
>>>I didn't know that April 1st was considered a holiday in the Philippines.
>>>So I waited for your call.
>>>Anyway, don't worry about that.
>>>I knew about it after I got the message from the/your site manager.
>>>How was your holiday?
>>>Correct.
>>>For me, it was a fantastic day. / For me, those were fantastic days.
>>>On Saturday, i went to GongGo - ji which is famous for its daffodil flowers and seaside.
>>>Correct.
>>>Correct. Better>>>I've heard of the place before.
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