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2010-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Hi. this is a [이름]. i'm on my summer vacation. my summer vacation started from last saturday. and it will end up at this wednesday. how's your day going? i woke up at around 8'o clock. and i did do the laundry.^ ^ and i came to library. so i am at library now. i wanted to enjoy my vacation at the beach but i have to study for my test. i have a test 15, august. but i went to beach last saturday. with my friend. we wanted go to the island which is famous fo its beautyful white beach. but there were many people who wanted go there too. so the ticket for the island sold out before we get to the station. so we give up to go to there, but we went to another beach. it took an 1 hour to get there from my home.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! So you have a summer vacation from your company, Wow!!! Good for you!!! Enjoy your vacation and I am excited to hear about your plans. We'll talk about it later during our class. See you!!Lei :-) Hi. this is a [이름].>>correct i'm on my summer vacation.  >>correct >>I am having my summer vacation. (better) my summer vacation started from last saturday.  >>Summer vacation started last Saturday. and it will end up at this Wednesday. >>and it will end this Wednesday.how's your day going? >>how's your day so far?i woke up at around 8'o clock.  >>correct and i did do the laundry.^ ^ >>and I did the laundry.and i came to library.  >>and I went to the library. so i am at library now.  >>correct i wanted to enjoy my vacation at the beach but i have to study for my test.  >>correct i have a test on the 15th of august. >>correct but i went to the beach last saturday.  >>correct with my friend.  >>correct we wanted go to the island which is famous for it's beautiful white beach. >>correct but there were many people who wanted to go there too.  >>correct so the ticket for the island sold out before we get to the station. >>correct so we gave up, but we went to another beach.  >>correct it took us 1 hour to get there from my home. >>correct

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