Good morning . lei.
학생이 쓴 원문
it's a clear and fresh day.it was raining during yesterday.
but today is shine day. in addition, there are flowers on my desk. it smells sweet. ^ ^
yesterday, we had a naming ceremony for the new vessel. it's a important event to builder and buyer. after a naming ceremony we can receive installment and buyer could take the vessel.
for the ceremony we went to Hotel which is located in Goe -je. it took an hour to get there. at the hotel, i enjoyed cocktail party. and also great lunch. best excite thing was i could meet lots of foreiner. it was good oppotunity to me to practice my English skills.
i was not excellent but, they looked like understand my speak. i was happy and enjoyed the party.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Wow it’s nice to know that you enjoyed the party. Also you were given a chance to talk to a foreigner and apply the things that you learned from our class. Great Job!!
Lei J
it's a clear and fresh day.
>>correct
it was raining during yesterday.>>it was raining yesterday
but today is shine day.
>>but today is a sunny day.
in addition, there are flowers on my desk.
>>correct
it smells sweet. ^ ^
>>correctyesterday, we had a naming ceremony for the new vessel.
>>correct
it's a important event to builder and buyer.
>>it’s an important event to one of our builders and buyers
after a naming ceremony we can receive installment and buyer could take the vessel.
>>after the naming ceremony, we received an installment pay and the buyer can take the vesselfor the ceremony we went to a Hotel which is located in Goe -je.
>>correct
it took an hour to get there.
>>correct
at the hotel, i enjoyed cocktail party.
>>at the hotel I enjoyed the cocktail party
and also great lunch.
>>and also we had a great lunch
best excite thing was i could meet lots of foreiner.
>>the most exciting thing is that I met a foreigner
it was good oppotunity to me to practice my English skills.
>>it was a good opportunity for me to practice my English skillsi was not excellent but, they looked like understand my speak.
>>I was not excellent but, I think he understands what I am trying to say
i was happy and enjoyed the party.
>>correct
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