Good morning . lei.

2010-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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it's a clear and fresh day.it was raining during yesterday. but today is shine day. in addition, there are flowers on my desk. it smells sweet. ^ ^ yesterday, we had a naming ceremony for the new vessel. it's a important event to builder and buyer. after a naming ceremony we can receive installment and buyer could take the vessel. for the ceremony we went to Hotel which is located in Goe -je. it took an hour to get there. at the hotel, i enjoyed cocktail party. and also great lunch. best excite thing was i could meet lots of foreiner. it was good oppotunity to me to practice my English skills. i was not excellent but, they looked like understand my speak. i was happy and enjoyed the party.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Wow it’s nice to know that you enjoyed the party. Also you were given a chance to talk to a foreigner and apply the things that you learned from our class. Great Job!! Lei J   it's a clear and fresh day. >>correct it was raining during yesterday.>>it was raining yesterday but today is shine day. >>but today is a sunny day. in addition, there are flowers on my desk. >>correct it smells sweet. ^ ^ >>correctyesterday, we had a naming ceremony for the new vessel. >>correct it's a important event to builder and buyer. >>it’s an important event to one of our builders and buyers after a naming ceremony we can receive installment and buyer could take the vessel. >>after the naming ceremony, we received an installment pay and the buyer can take the vesselfor the ceremony we went to a Hotel which is located in Goe -je. >>correct it took an hour to get there. >>correct at the hotel, i enjoyed cocktail party. >>at the hotel I enjoyed the cocktail party and also great lunch. >>and also we had a great lunch best excite thing was i could meet lots of foreiner. >>the most exciting thing is that I met a foreigner it was good oppotunity to me to practice my English skills. >>it was a good opportunity for me to practice my English skillsi was not excellent but, they looked like understand my speak. >>I was not excellent but, I think he understands what I am trying to say i was happy and enjoyed the party. >>correct

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