Good morning . lei.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi.~
how about your weekend? did you have a great days?
especially in weekend, time flies.
we didn't discuss about our weekend plan last friday.^ ^
because we had a too short time to share it.
anyways, on last saturday, i had two appointments. on finishing work, i went to meet close friend who quit the job two weeks ago. she worked at our company and for she's dream she quit the job. it's not a long time to see her since we've seen last time. i feel like there were lots of time. we went to famous beef resaurant and also went to eat an icecream.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
How are you sweetie? I agree that time flies like an arrow. I am glad to hear that you enjoyed your weekend as I did. Well, you’re right we weren’t able to talk about our weekend plans last Friday but I hope that we will have enough time later. See you at our class.
Lei J
Hi.~
>>correcthow about your weekend?
>>correct
did you have a great days?
>>did you have a great day?especially in weekend, time flies.
>>correct
>>time flies specially during the weekend.we didn't discuss about our weekend plan last friday.^ ^
>>correctbecause we had a too short time to share it.
>>because we had a short time to talkanyways, on last saturday, i had two appointments.
>>anyways, last Saturday, I had to attend two appointments
on finishing work, i went to meet close friend who quit the job two weeks ago.
>>upon finishing my job, I met with my close who quit her job two weeks ago
she worked at our company and for she's dream she quit the job.
>> she worked at our company but she needs to quit her job to follow her dreams
it's not a long time to see her since we've seen last time.
>>I only met with her for a short time
i feel like there were lots of time.
>>correct
we went to famous beef resaurant and also went to eat an icecream.>>we went to a famous beef restaurant and had some ice cream
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