Good morning . lei.

2010-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 lynn

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finally, it's a thursday. we can have a long weekend.~ do you have any special plan for it? i am going to go to library. i have to prepare the examination. but, on sunday, i am going to go my freind's wedding ceremony. i am worrying about it. i want to spend my all time at the wedding ceremony on sunday. but i have to study. yesterday, as soon as the board meeting finished, i departed from my company. i had an arrangement with my co-workers. one of them bought a new mobile phone at my little sister's store. i introduce him to her. he could buy a phone with discount. after then, we went to have a dinner. we had a pizza for our dinner.

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Hello [이름]!! Wow it seems that you’ll be very busy again this weekend. Well just have fun and also try to squeeze in your studies as well. Just enjoy life and take it easy okay. Se you later!! Lei J   finally, it's a thursday. >>correct we can have a long weekend.~ >>correct do you have any special plan for it? >>correct >>Do you have any special plans for the weekend? i am going to go to library. >>I’m going to the library i have to prepare the examination. >>I hav to prepare for my examination but, on sunday, i am going to go my freind's wedding ceremony. >>but on Sunday, I am attending my friend’s wedding ceremony i am worrying about it. >>correct i want to spend my all time at the wedding ceremony on sunday. >>I want to spend the whole at the wedding on Sunday but i have to study. >>correct yesterday, as soon as the board meeting finished, i departed from my company. >>yesterday, as soon as the board meeting was finished, I left our company i had an arrangement with my co-workers. >>correct one of them bought a new mobile phone at my little sister's store. >>correct i introduce him to her. >>I introduced him to her he could buy a phone with discount. >>He can have a discount when h buys a phone from there after then, we went to have a dinner. >>correct we had a pizza for our dinner.>>correct

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