good morning. lei.~

2010-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Hi!. it's a brand-new day. how about your last long weekend? i spent most of the weekend at the library. but there were some interesing thins during the weekend. on last friday, my cousin visited at our home with her's husband and daughters. because she lives far from my home. we didn't see each other often. she has two daughters. they are so cute. ^ ^ i played with them. for my cousin, i prepared dinner instead of my mother. my mother was so busy. so she had no time for preparing dinner. due to my cousin's visit i couldn't study a lot. but it was great time.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!! You’ve been very busy again last weekend. Seems that you did a lot of things. Well anyways, we’ll talk about it later during our class. By the way, I noticed that with your sentences, you tend to use “ON” before the days, it is better to say last “Friday”, last Saturday instead of on last “Friday”. But all the other sentences are correct. Always stay happy!! Lei J Hi!. it's a brand-new day. >>correct!!how about your last long weekend? >>correct!! >>how about your long weekend? (>>better) i spent most of the weekend at the library. >>correct!! but there were some interesting things during the weekend. >>correct!! on last friday, my cousin visited at our home with her's husband and daughters. >>last Friday, my cousin visited our home with her family. because she lives far from my home. >>correct!! we didn't see each other that often. >>correct!! she has two daughters. they are so cute. ^ ^ >>correct!! i played with them. >>correct!! for my cousin, i prepared dinner instead of my mother. >>correct!! my mother was so busy. >>correct!! so she had no time preparing dinner. >>correct!! due to my cousin's visit i couldn't study a lot. >>correct!! but it was great time. >>correct!!

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