good morning. lei.~
학생이 쓴 원문
lei.it's me. [이름]!. i am missing you. i called to the site manger for changing my information. but i couldn't get your call. i'll check it again. anyways, during last week, i had lots of happenings. the naming ceremony, meeting with an American cheerful woman who is i had met fist time in my life. , car accident, taking an examination, driving on the high way, and so on...
i want to talk with you. but i have an arrangement at this lunch. so i postponed our class again.ㅠ ㅠ
i hope to have a class with you tommorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
I miss you too!! We have a lot of catching up to do. I hope to talk to you tomorrow! Take care dear!!
Lei J
lei.it's me. [이름]!.
>>correct!!
i am missing you.
>>correct
>>I miss you!!
i called to the site manger for changing my information.
>>I calld your site manager to change my information.
but i couldn't get your call.
>>correct!!
>>But I wasn’t able to receive your call (correct)
i'll check it again.
>>correct!!
anyways, during last week, i had lots of happenings.
>>anyways, a lot of things happened last week.
the naming ceremony, meeting with an American cheerful woman who is i had met fist
time in my life. ,
>>the naming ceremony, and meeting a cheerful American woman and that was the first time for me,
car accident, taking an examination, driving on the high way, and so on...>>correct!!
i want to talk with you.
>>correct!!
but i have an arrangement at this lunch.
>but I have an appointment this lunch break.
so i postponed our class again.ㅠ ㅠ>>correct!!
i hope to have a class with you tomorrow.>>correct !!
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