good morning. lei.~

2010-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

lei.it's me. [이름]!. i am missing you. i called to the site manger for changing my information. but i couldn't get your call. i'll check it again. anyways, during last week, i had lots of happenings. the naming ceremony, meeting with an American cheerful woman who is i had met fist time in my life. , car accident, taking an examination, driving on the high way, and so on... i want to talk with you. but i have an arrangement at this lunch. so i postponed our class again.ㅠ ㅠ i hope to have a class with you tommorrow.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! I miss you too!! We have a lot of catching up to do. I hope to talk to you tomorrow! Take care dear!! Lei J   lei.it's me. [이름]!. >>correct!! i am missing you. >>correct >>I miss you!! i called to the site manger for changing my information. >>I calld your site manager to change my information. but i couldn't get your call. >>correct!! >>But I wasn’t able to receive your call (correct) i'll check it again. >>correct!! anyways, during last week, i had lots of happenings. >>anyways, a lot of things happened last week. the naming ceremony, meeting with an American cheerful woman who is i had met fist time in my life. , >>the naming ceremony, and meeting a cheerful American woman and that was the first time for me, car accident, taking an examination, driving on the high way, and so on...>>correct!! i want to talk with you. >>correct!! but i have an arrangement at this lunch. >but I have an appointment this lunch break. so i postponed our class again.ㅠ ㅠ>>correct!! i hope to have a class with you tomorrow.>>correct !!

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