good morning. lei.~

2010-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

^ ^ it's a brand new day. Good morning.~ everythings are going well. it's a peaceful thursday morning. yesterday, i had an appointment with my co-worker. they are three girls who are the same years old with me. it was our first time to have a meeting all together. we decided to go to have a rare fish (it's a 'hoe' in korean.) for our dinner. wow. it was great time. after dinner we went to dunkin donuts. do you know dunkin? it's a cafeteria which famous for donuts and coffee. we had a chatting time.

강사 첨삭

[이름]! It's nice to know that you enjoyed last night. Wow, it made me miss my girl-friends. It's been a while since I went our with them. Anyways see you later during our class. Lei J   ^ ^ it's a brand new day. >>correct!! Good morning.~>>correct!! Everythings are going well. >>correct!! it's a peaceful thursday morning.>>correct!! yesterday, i had an appointment with my co-worker. >>correct!! they are three girls who are the same years old with me. >>they are 3 girls whom are of the same age as I am. it was our first time to have a meeting all together.>>correct!! we decided to go to have a rare fish (it's a 'hoe' in korean.) >>we decided to eat a rare fish  (it's a 'hoe' in korean.) for our dinner. wow. >>correct!! it was great time.>>I had a great time. after dinner we went to dunkin donuts. >>correct!! do you know dunkin? >>correct!! it's a cafeteria which famous for donuts and coffee. >>it's a cafeteria which is famous for donuts and coffee. we had a chatting time. >>we all had a chat.

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