good morning. lei.~
학생이 쓴 원문
^ ^ it's a brand new day.
Good morning.~
everythings are going well. it's a peaceful thursday morning.
yesterday, i had an appointment with my co-worker. they are three girls who are the same years old with me. it was our first time to have a meeting all together.
we decided to go to have a rare fish (it's a 'hoe' in korean.) for our dinner. wow. it was great time.
after dinner we went to dunkin donuts. do you know dunkin? it's a cafeteria which famous for donuts and coffee. we had a chatting time.
강사 첨삭
[이름]!
It's nice to know that you enjoyed last night. Wow, it made me miss my girl-friends. It's been a while since I went our with them. Anyways see you later during our class.
Lei J
^ ^ it's a brand new day. >>correct!!
Good morning.~>>correct!!
Everythings are going well.
>>correct!!
it's a peaceful thursday morning.>>correct!!
yesterday, i had an appointment with my co-worker.
>>correct!!
they are three girls who are the same years old with me.
>>they are 3 girls whom are of the same age as I am.
it was our first time to have a meeting all together.>>correct!!
we decided to go to have a rare fish (it's a 'hoe' in korean.)
>>we decided to eat a rare fish (it's a 'hoe' in korean.)
for our dinner. wow.
>>correct!!
it was great time.>>I had a great time.
after dinner we went to dunkin donuts.
>>correct!!
do you know dunkin?
>>correct!!
it's a cafeteria which famous for donuts and coffee.
>>it's a cafeteria which is famous for donuts and coffee.
we had a chatting time.
>>we all had a chat.
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