good morning. lei.~

2010-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Anna

학생이 쓴 원문

lei.~ it's me [이름].~ did you have a great weekend? i did. i went to my friend's wedding ceremony last saturday. it took around 5 hours. it was very long trip but the trip was enjoyable because of my friends. when we arrived at the wedding hall. we was very surprised, the bride was so beautiful. ^ ^ we took some pictures. at the wedding ceremony. i met my old friend. she was my middle school friend. we was close when we were 2nd grade. when i saw her, i couldn't remember her name immediatly. because our last meeting was ten years ago. wow! she sent me a message after wedding. so i kept her address in my cell phone. we promised to meet soon.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] dear!! It's nice to know that you ahad a great weekend! And one more thing you know what, I noticed that whenever you are having a good feeling, your composition is wonderful too!! I barely had minimal corrections to your sentences. Keep it up!! And hopefully, you will always have a great day!! Take care and see you again tomorrow!! lei.~ it's me [이름].~ >>correct did you have a great weekend?>>correct i did. i went to my friend's wedding ceremony last saturday. >>correct it took around 5 hours. >>correct it was very long trip but the trip was enjoyable because of my friends. >>it was a very long trip but the trip was enjoyable because of my friends when we arrived at the wedding hall. >>correct we was very surprised, the bride was so beautiful. ^ ^ >>we were surprised because the bride was so beautiful we took some pictures. >>correct at the wedding ceremony. >>correct i met my old friend. >>correct she was my middle school friend. >>correct we was close when we were 2nd grade. >>we were close when we were at 2nd grade. when i saw her, i couldn't remember her name immediately. >>correct because our last meeting was ten years ago. wow!>>correct she sent me a message after the wedding. >>correct so i kept her address in my cell phone. >>correct we promised to meet soon. >>correct

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·