good morning. lei.~
학생이 쓴 원문
lei.~ it's me [이름].~ did you have a great weekend?
i did. i went to my friend's wedding ceremony last saturday.
it took around 5 hours. it was very long trip but the trip was enjoyable because of my friends. when we arrived at the wedding hall. we was very surprised, the bride was so beautiful. ^ ^
we took some pictures. at the wedding ceremony. i met my old friend. she was my middle school friend. we was close when we were 2nd grade. when i saw her, i couldn't remember her name immediatly. because our last meeting was ten years ago. wow!
she sent me a message after wedding. so i kept her address in my cell phone. we promised to meet soon.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] dear!!
It's nice to know that you ahad a great weekend! And one more thing you know what, I noticed that whenever you are having a good feeling, your composition is wonderful too!! I barely had minimal corrections to your sentences. Keep it up!! And hopefully, you will always have a great day!! Take care and see you again tomorrow!!
lei.~ it's me [이름].~
>>correct
did you have a great weekend?>>correct
i did. i went to my friend's wedding ceremony last saturday. >>correct
it took around 5 hours.
>>correct
it was very long trip but the trip was enjoyable because of my friends.
>>it was a very long trip but the trip was enjoyable because of my friends
when we arrived at the wedding hall.
>>correct
we was very surprised, the bride was so beautiful. ^ ^ >>we were surprised because the bride was so beautiful
we took some pictures.
>>correct
at the wedding ceremony.
>>correct
i met my old friend.
>>correct
she was my middle school friend.
>>correct
we was close when we were 2nd grade.
>>we were close when we were at 2nd grade.
when i saw her, i couldn't remember her name immediately.
>>correct
because our last meeting was ten years ago. wow!>>correct
she sent me a message after the wedding.
>>correct
so i kept her address in my cell phone.
>>correct
we promised to meet soon.
>>correct
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