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학생이 쓴 원문
on last sunday. i went to car drive with my friend. she's name is kyoung - hwa. she wanted to have a driving. i am not good driver. but i tried it. we went to Geo-je island which is take 30 minutes from our hometown. we had seafood for our lunch. we went to several famous places in Geo-je.
i think it is the best travel which we travel together with close friend. i and my friend have known each other more than 20 years.
we used to argue. and we are so different. but we understand each other well.
it was quite busy weekend. but it was pretty great weekend.
강사 첨삭
on last sunday. i went to car drive with my friend.
>>last Sunday, me and my friend went to a road trip.
she's name is kyoung - hwa.
>>her name is kyoung - hwa.
she wanted to have a driving.
>>she wanted me to drive.
i am not good driver.
>>correct!!
but i tried it.
>>correct!!
we went to Geo-je island which is take 30 minutes from our hometown.
>>we went to Geo-jo island which takes 30 minutes drive from our hometown
we had seafood for our lunch.
>>correct!!
we went to several famous places in Geo-je. >>correct!!
i think it is the best travel which we travel together with close friend.
>>I think it's the best travel I had with my close friends
i and my friend have known each other more than 20 years. >>me and my friend had known each other for more than 20 years
we used to argue. and we are so different.
>>correct!!
but we understand each other well. >>correct!!
it was quite a busy weekend.
>>correct!!
but it was a pretty great weekend.
>>correct!!
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