good morning. lei.~

2010-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 ali

학생이 쓴 원문

it's a friday. ^ ^ it already passed half a year.wow. time really flies. i started this class last january. it has been passed 5 months. thru the time, i feel my English skill improved than before. neverthless, i still make some mistakes during the class and i don't have enough voacabulary for speaking fluently. but after few months later, i think i will be able to speaking in English more fluent. ^ ^ did you heard the news. the naro space rocket failed again. it launched into the orbit 5:01PM yesterday. but it exploded in midair. there is not tracing the origin yet. but the goverment announced that we are going to try the launching again.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Yeah, it’s Friday again!! I heard about what happened to the naro space satellite. Anyways, you’re skills had improved. You can express yourself better now. You are doing a good job actually. Well, we will talk about it later during our class.   it's a friday. ^ ^ >>It’s Friday again. it already passed half a year.wow. >>half a year already passed. time really flies. >>correct!! i started this class last january. >>correct!! it has been passed 5 months. >>it has been 5 months already. thru the time, i feel my English skill improved than before. >>thru the tim, I feel that my English skills is better than before. nevertheless, i still make some mistakes during the class and i don't have enough vocabulary for speaking fluently. >>correct!! but after few months later, i think i will be able to speaking in English more fluent. ^ ^>>but after a few months, I think I will be able to speak English more fluently. did you heard the news. >>have you heard about the news? the naro space rocket failed again. >>correct!! it launched into the orbit 5:01PM yesterday. >>correct!! but it exploded in the midair. >>correct!! there is not tracing the origin yet. >>there is no trac for its origin yet. but the government announced that we are going to try the launching it again. >>correct!!

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