good morning. lei.~
학생이 쓴 원문
it's a friday. ^ ^
it already passed half a year.wow. time really flies. i started this class last january. it has been passed 5 months. thru the time, i feel my English skill improved than before. neverthless, i still make some mistakes during the class and i don't have enough voacabulary for speaking fluently. but after few months later, i think i will be able to speaking in English more fluent. ^ ^
did you heard the news. the naro space rocket failed again. it launched into the orbit 5:01PM yesterday. but it exploded in midair. there is not tracing the origin yet. but the goverment announced that we are going to try the launching again.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Yeah, it’s Friday again!! I heard about what happened to the naro space satellite. Anyways, you’re skills had improved. You can express yourself better now. You are doing a good job actually. Well, we will talk about it later during our class.
it's a friday. ^ ^ >>It’s Friday again.
it already passed half a year.wow.
>>half a year already passed.
time really flies.
>>correct!!
i started this class last january.
>>correct!!
it has been passed 5 months.
>>it has been 5 months already.
thru the time, i feel my English skill improved than before.
>>thru the tim, I feel that my English skills is better than before.
nevertheless, i still make some mistakes during the class and i don't have enough
vocabulary for speaking fluently.
>>correct!!
but after few months later, i think i will be able to speaking in English more fluent. ^ ^>>but after a few months, I think I will be able to speak English more fluently.
did you heard the news.
>>have you heard about the news?
the naro space rocket failed again.
>>correct!!
it launched into the orbit 5:01PM yesterday.
>>correct!!
but it exploded in the midair.
>>correct!!
there is not tracing the origin yet.
>>there is no trac for its origin yet.
but the government announced that we are going to try the launching it again.
>>correct!!
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