good morning. lei.~

2010-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi.~ it begins a new week. did you have a good time during last weekend? i was quite busy last weekend. wow. as soon as finish my work, i went to meet my friend. we have a lunch together and we have a tea time with a great chatting. after then, i went to my closed friend's shop. and after, i met the guy who i met at the blind meeting. we had a driving along the seaside. and yesterday. i went to see a movie. the movie title is The A Team. have you ever heard about the movie? it was excited movie. at night, i went to concert with my friend.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! Wow!! You really had a busy weekend. How could someone be so busy and have a lot of meetings in 2 days? ^^ Well at least you had a great time. I am looking forward on having a class with you later. so see you!! Lei :-) Hi.~ it begins a new week. >>Hi, it is another start for a new week.did you have a good time during last weekend? >>Did you have a good time last weekend?i was quite busy last weekend. wow. >>correct!!as soon as finish my work, i went to meet my friend. >>as soon as I finished my work, i went to meet my friend.we have a lunch together and we have a tea time with a great chatting. >>we had lunch together and chat while having tea.after then, i went to my close friend's shop. >>correct!!and after, i met the guy who i met at the blind meeting. >>correct!!>> after which, I went to see the guy whom I met in a blind date.we had a driving along the seaside. >>we had a drive along the seaside.and yesterday. i went to see a movie. >>correct!!the movie title is The A Team.>>correct!!have you ever heard about the movie? >>correct!!it was excited movie.>>it was an exciting movie.at night, i went to concert with my friend.>>after that, I went to see a concert with my friend.

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