good morning. lei.~
학생이 쓴 원문
good morning. ^ ^ this is our first class this week. sorry.~
so it already past half of week.
did you hear about the game which was played at 3:30 am today.
i was not going to watch the game. because i think if i watch it
i must be tired. i think i will just check the score when i wake up.
but i opened my eyes at 3:48 am. i checked the score thru the internet. we lost 1 goal at that time. when i recognized the score, i was not able to sleep. so i started to watch the game.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
I guess we all have good news today!! Yeah I am so happy that team South Korea made it to the next round!! Yipee!! I am so excited to talk to you about it later!! See you!!
Lei :-)
good morning. ^ ^
>>correct!!
this is our first class this week. sorry.~>>correct!!
so it already past half of week.
>>Half a week already passed.did you hear about the game which was played at 3:30 am today.>>correct!!
i was not going to watch the game.
>>I was not supposed to watch the game today.
because i think if i watch it i must be tired.
>>Because when I do, I will be so tired.
i think i will just check the score when i wake up.>>I thought of just checking the score when I wake up.
but i opened my eyes at 3:48 am.
>>correct!!
i checked the score thru the internet.
>>correct!!
we lost 1 goal at that time.
>>correct!!
when i recognized the score, i was not able to sleep.
>>when I learned about the score, I was not able to go back to sleep.
so i started to watch the game.
>>correct!!
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