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2010-06-23 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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i bet with my friend about the game. i thought we will win at 2:1 score. until the second of a game we won at 2:1 score. i wanted to keep the score. but finally, the game was ended at a drawn match. so we got the ticket to the next match. it's our first time to advance to World cup's second round during the playing tour.

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i bet with my friend about the game.  >>I had a bet with my friend about the result of the game. i thought we will win at 2:1 score. >>correct^^ until the second of a game we won at 2:1 score.  >>until the second half of the game the score was 2:1. i wanted to keep the score.  >>I wanted the score to be that way. but finally, the game was ended at a drawn match.  >>but the ended with a draw score of 2:2. so we got the ticket to the next match. >>correct^^ it's our first time to advance to the World cup's second round during the playing tour. >>correct^^

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