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i bet with my friend about the game. i thought we will win at 2:1 score.
until the second of a game we won at 2:1 score. i wanted to keep the score. but finally, the game was ended at a drawn match. so we got the ticket to the next match.
it's our first time to advance to World cup's second round during the playing tour.
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i bet with my friend about the game.
>>I had a bet with my friend about the result of the game.
i thought we will win at 2:1 score. >>correct^^
until the second of a game we won at 2:1 score.
>>until the second half of the game the score was 2:1.
i wanted to keep the score.
>>I wanted the score to be that way.
but finally, the game was ended at a drawn match.
>>but the ended with a draw score of 2:2.
so we got the ticket to the next match. >>correct^^
it's our first time to advance to the World cup's second round during the playing tour.
>>correct^^
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