good morning. lei.~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi.~
how are you? i feel good today. it is a fine weather after long spell of rain. ^ ^
i finished my task which was given by my boss. he gave me the agreement and made me to translate it.
it took 2 weeks. wow. it was hard task to me.
i didn't finish it perfectly. my boss correct it several times.
there are lots of legal expressions with long sentences.
my boss gave me some tips how to translate it.
i think this experience will be good experience to me for studying English.
i felt my weakness in English i need to study more and more.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for passing a composition today!! I am really glad that you finished your task already. Great job!! See you later!!
Lei :-)
Hi.~how are you? i feel good today.
>>correct^^
it is a fine weather after long spell of rain. ^ ^>>We have a fine weather after long days of rain ^^
i finished my task which was given by my boss.
>>correct^^
he gave me the agreement and made me to translate it. >>correct^^
it took 2 weeks. wow.
>>it took 2 weeks to finish it.
it was hard task to me. >>it was a hard task for me.
i didn't finish it perfectly.
>>correct^^
my boss correct it several times.>>my boss corrected it several times.
there are lots of legal expressions with long sentences. >>there are lots of legal expressions used in the sentences.
my boss gave me some tips how to translate it. >>my boss gave me some tips on how to translate it.
i think this experience will be good experience to me for studying English. >>I think this experience is good for my English studies.
i felt my weakness in English i need to study more and more.
>>I feel that I am weak in regards with English language and I need to study more.
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