good morning. lei.~

2010-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Hi.~ how are you? i feel good today. it is a fine weather after long spell of rain. ^ ^ i finished my task which was given by my boss. he gave me the agreement and made me to translate it. it took 2 weeks. wow. it was hard task to me. i didn't finish it perfectly. my boss correct it several times. there are lots of legal expressions with long sentences. my boss gave me some tips how to translate it. i think this experience will be good experience to me for studying English. i felt my weakness in English i need to study more and more.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for passing a composition today!! I am really glad that you finished your task already. Great job!! See you later!! Lei :-) Hi.~how are you? i feel good today.  >>correct^^ it is a fine weather after long spell of rain. ^ ^>>We have a fine weather after long days of rain ^^ i finished my task which was given by my boss.  >>correct^^ he gave me the agreement and made me to translate it. >>correct^^ it took 2 weeks. wow.  >>it took 2 weeks to finish it. it was hard task to me. >>it was a hard task for me. i didn't finish it perfectly.  >>correct^^ my boss correct it several times.>>my boss corrected it several times. there are lots of legal expressions with long sentences. >>there are lots of legal expressions used in the sentences. my boss gave me some tips how to translate it. >>my boss gave me some tips on how to translate it. i think this experience will be good experience to me for studying English. >>I think this experience is good for my English studies. i felt my weakness in English i need to study more and more. >>I feel that I am weak in regards with English language and I need to study more.

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