good morning. lei.~
학생이 쓴 원문
hi.
this is [이름].
it's a raining day. it may be continuing all day. because of the rain. it's a very humid day.
i was learned that it's going to rain during this saturday. but it started last night.
after work, i went to dinning together with my boss and another team. before get in the car, i hesitated to join the dinner. because i didn't feel good. but i couldn't tell to boss about my condition.
so i went there. as the time passed, my condition became better.
we had roast eel for the dinner. actually, i didn't like it. because it looks like snake and also it has a fishy smell.
but many people said it's good to help our body. so i tried to eat the food.
yes. it was delicious. i think my appetite improved.^ ^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Roasted eel? that sound yummy ^^. I am glad to hear that you are feeling better now. Anyways we will take about this event later during our class. Your sentences are good. Keep it up!!
Lei :-)
hi.this is [이름]. >>correct
it's a raining day.
>>it's a rainy day
>>it's raining today
it may be continuing all day.
>>correct
because of the rain.
>>correct
it's a very humid day. >>correct
i was learned that it's going to rain during this saturday.
>>I learned that it's going to rain during the weekend
but it started last night.>>but it started raining last night
after work, i went to dinning together with my boss and another team.
>>after work, I had a dinner with my boss and another team
before get in the car, i hesitated to join the dinner.
>>before getting in the car, i hesitated to join the dinner.
because i didn't feel good.
>>correct
but i couldn't tell my boss about my condition.>>correct
so i went there.
>>correct
as time passed, my condition became better. >>correct
we had roasted eel for dinner.
>>correct
actually, i didn't like it.
>>correct
because it looks like snake and also it has a fishy smell. >>correct
but many people said it's good to help our body.
>>correct
so i tried to eat the food. >>correct
yes. it was delicious.
>>correct
i think my appetite improved.^ ^
>>correct
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