good morning. lei.~

2010-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

hi. this is [이름]. it's a raining day. it may be continuing all day. because of the rain. it's a very humid day. i was learned that it's going to rain during this saturday. but it started last night. after work, i went to dinning together with my boss and another team. before get in the car, i hesitated to join the dinner. because i didn't feel good. but i couldn't tell to boss about my condition. so i went there. as the time passed, my condition became better. we had roast eel for the dinner. actually, i didn't like it. because it looks like snake and also it has a fishy smell. but many people said it's good to help our body. so i tried to eat the food. yes. it was delicious. i think my appetite improved.^ ^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Roasted eel? that sound yummy ^^. I am glad to hear that you are feeling better now. Anyways we will take about this event later during our class. Your sentences are good. Keep it up!! Lei :-) hi.this is [이름]. >>correct it's a raining day.  >>it's a rainy day >>it's raining today it may be continuing all day.  >>correct because of the rain.  >>correct it's a very humid day. >>correct i was learned that it's going to rain during this saturday.  >>I learned that it's going to rain during the weekend but it started last night.>>but it started raining last night after work, i went to dinning together with my boss and another team.  >>after work, I had a dinner with my boss and another team before get in the car, i hesitated to join the dinner.  >>before getting in the car, i hesitated to join the dinner. because i didn't feel good.  >>correct but i couldn't tell my boss about my condition.>>correct so i went there.  >>correct as time passed, my condition became better. >>correct we had roasted eel for dinner.  >>correct actually, i didn't like it.  >>correct because it looks like snake and also it has a fishy smell. >>correct but many people said it's good to help our body.  >>correct so i tried to eat the food. >>correct yes. it was delicious.  >>correct i think my appetite improved.^ ^ >>correct  

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