good morning. lei.~

2010-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi. lei.~ this is [이름]. did you have a great weekend? yes, i did. ^ ^ it was not raining day during last weekend. i had a date. i wanted to visit some place which is imposible to get there without car. so i request to my friend to go there with me. he allowed to go there with me with pleasure. so i made a plan for the driving. i was going to prepare picnic box. so after work i went to market to buy some grocery for kimbop last friday. and i woke up early in the last saturday. it took three hours to made kimbop. i was quite busy for preparing. i didn't say to him i made a lunch box. i wanted to make him be surprised. ^ ^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Wow, so you did prepare a lunch box for you and your friend. I think it was kind of a date. I am excited to hear about it. See you later!! Lei :-) Hi. lei.~this is [이름].  did you have a great weekend? yes, i did. >>correct^ ^it was not raining day during last weekend. >>it wasn't raining last weekend i had a date.  >>correct i wanted to visit some place which is imposible to get there without car.  >>I wanted to visit a place and it is impossible to go there without using a car so i request to my friend to go there with me.  >>so I asked my friend to go there with me. he allowed to go there with me with pleasure. >>he agreed to go there with me so i made a plan for the driving.  >>correct i am going to prepare picnic box. >>correct so after work i went to market to buy some grocery for kimbop last friday. >>correct and i woke up early in last Saturday.  >>correct it took three hours to made kimbop.  >>it took me three hours to prepare kimbop.  i was quite busy preparing it.>>correct i didn't say to him i made a lunch box.  >>correct i wanted to make him be surprised. ^ ^ >>I wanted to surprise him

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