good morning. lei.~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi. lei.~
this is [이름]. did you have a great weekend? yes, i did.
^ ^
it was not raining day during last weekend.
i had a date. i wanted to visit some place which is imposible to get there without car. so i request to my friend to go there with me. he allowed to go there with me with pleasure.
so i made a plan for the driving. i was going to prepare picnic box.
so after work i went to market to buy some grocery for kimbop last friday.
and i woke up early in the last saturday. it took three hours to made kimbop. i was quite busy for preparing.
i didn't say to him i made a lunch box. i wanted to make him be surprised. ^ ^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Wow, so you did prepare a lunch box for you and your friend. I think it was kind of a date. I am excited to hear about it. See you later!!
Lei :-)
Hi. lei.~this is [이름].
did you have a great weekend? yes, i did.
>>correct^ ^it was not raining day during last weekend. >>it wasn't raining last weekend
i had a date.
>>correct
i wanted to visit some place which is imposible to get there without car.
>>I wanted to visit a place and it is impossible to go there without using a car
so i request to my friend to go there with me.
>>so I asked my friend to go there with me.
he allowed to go there with me with pleasure. >>he agreed to go there with me
so i made a plan for the driving.
>>correct
i am going to prepare picnic box. >>correct
so after work i went to market to buy some grocery for kimbop last friday. >>correct
and i woke up early in last Saturday.
>>correct
it took three hours to made kimbop.
>>it took me three hours to prepare kimbop.
i was quite busy preparing it.>>correct
i didn't say to him i made a lunch box.
>>correct
i wanted to make him be surprised. ^ ^
>>I wanted to surprise him
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