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2010-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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i have to take exam two subjects next year which i was missed . and after i pass two subjects, i am able to have a chance to take last exam. so it takes two years. i don't have enough time. so i am going to change my major as business administration. i graduated from 2 years college so i have a qualification which is exemption until second exam. so i am able to take third exam as major in business administration. if i pass it i can get degree in business. i want to have a English major. so after get a degree in business administration. i am going to try again in Enlglish major next year. and today i have to attend naming ceremony.so i postponed our class. sorry. have a great weekend and let's talk about the exam next monday.

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i have to take exam two subjects next year which i was missed .

>>I will be having an exam with the two subjects that I missed

and after i pass two subjects, i am able to have a chance to take last exam.

>>and after passing these two subjects, then that's the only time that I can take the final exam

so it takes two years.
>>correct

i don't have enough time.

>>correct

so i am going to change my major as business administration.

>>so I am going to change my major to business administration

i graduated from 2 years college so i have a qualification which is exemption until second exam.

>>I finished a technical major so I have the qualification and exemption up to the second exam

so i am able to take third exam as major in business administration.

>>So I will be able to take the third exam for business administration

if i pass it i can get degree in business.
>>If I'll pass this one, then I'll get a degree for business

i want to take English major.

>>correct

so after get a degree in business administration.
>>and after getting a degree in business administration

i am going to try again in Enlglish major next year.
>>I am going to take English major again next year

and today i have to attend naming ceremony.

>>correct

so i postponed our class.
>>that's why I put our class on hold

sorry.

>>correct

have a great weekend and let's talk about the exam next Monday.

>>correct

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