good morning. lei.~2
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we met at about 3pm. and we went to the cafeteria which is i hoped to go. it took 1 hour by car. it is located far from town. so it has a great sightview. and also it is famous for the coffee and bread.
the place was small than my imagination, but it was the best place for me.
after enjoyed coffee, me and my friend went to see a movie which is entitled 'knight and day' have you ever seen it?
and after then, i went to play baseball and basketball at the arcade.
i like it very much.
for the last i had a fireworks display
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we met at about 3pm.
>>correct
and we went to the cafeteria which is i hoped to go.
>>and we went to the cafeteria where i hoped to go.
it took 1 hour by car.
>>it took us 1 hour to reach the place
it is located far from town.
>>it is located far from our town
so it has a great sightview.
>>it has a great scenery
and also it is famous for the coffee and bread.>>correct
the place was small than my imagination, but it was the best place for me. >>the place was smaller than I have imagined, but it was the best place for me.
after enjoyed coffee, me and my friend went to see a movie which is entitled 'knight and day' have you ever seen it? >>after enjoying the coffee,
me and my friend went to see a movie 'knight and day' have you seen it?
and after then, i went to play baseball and basketball at the arcade.>>correct
i like it very much.>>correct
for the last i had a fireworks display
>>lastly, we watched the fireworks display
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