Good Morning Ms. [Name]!
학생이 쓴 원문
It's Friday!
But, What a bad sentence!
Why don't you funny sentence for make homework?
Anyway, this is my homework.
(When) John Brown was twenty-five (years) old, he (robbed) a bank and killed two (policemen) (who) tried to arrest him.
Two days later, he was caught, convicted (of) murder and (robbery) and sentenced (to) death.
John Brown appealed (to) the judge (for) mercy, but the judge (didn't change) his decision.
thank you so much, Ma'am Jane!
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Sir Steve!
Thank you so much for your composition today. I\'ll try to make funny sentences for you to work on next time. You made my day with this homework. Take care and have a happy Friday!
T. JanE ^^It\'s Friday!>> Correct.But, What a bad sentence!>> Correct.Why don\'t you funny sentence for make homework?>> Why don\'t you make a funny sentence for my homework?Anyway, this is my homework.>> Correct.(When) John Brown was twenty-five (years) old, he (robbed) a bank and killed two (policemen) (who) tried to arrest him.>> Correct.Two days later, he was caught, convicted (of) murder and (robbery) and sentenced (to) death.>> Correct.John Brown appealed (to) the judge (for) mercy, but the judge (didn\'t change) his decision.>> Correct.Thank you so much, Ma\'am Jane! >> Correct.
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