Good morning Teacher Feye/

2012-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morming! You look so tired in every morning and i also feel tired every morning. I think we are not early bird style, but you and i have participated in the class without absent until now. It is good! And.......let me write my homework. Encounter- Everyday i encounter difficult conversation with foreigners who work in Sahalin, Russia. It makes me stress. appropriate- Which costume is appropriate in this party? purpose- What is your purpose in life? misuse- Somebody misuse their power and bother other people using their position. I know that i finish my homeworks very late. I dont have a time on weekdays. I will be happy if you understand my situation. :)

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Don't worry I understand your situation. I am glad that you are able to do them during weekend. I think that is good for me. I hope you could do some of them during the weekday so that you will not have a lot to do during the weekend. Yes! I am not an early bird I am more of an afternoon person. I am more productive in the afternoon. But you know I have been doing this for years so I am getting used to it. See you later! Teacher Faye Here are your corrections: Good morming!You look so tired in every morning and i also feel tired every morning. >>You look tired every morning and I also feel tired in the morning. I think we are not early bird style, but you and i have participated in the class without absent until now. >>I think being an early bird is not our style but, we participate in class everyday without an absent.  It is good! >>I think that is good!And.......let me write my homework.Encounter- Everyday i encounter difficult conversation with foreigners who work in Sahalin, Russia. It makes me stress. >>I encounter difficult conversations with Russians everyday. It makes me stressed.appropriate- Which costume is appropriate in this party? >>Which costume is appropriate for this party?purpose- What is your purpose in life? >>Correct!misuse- Somebody misuse their power and bother other people using their position. >>Some people misuse their power and bother other people using their position.I know that i finish my homeworks very late. >>Correct! I dont have a time on weekdays. >>I don't have time during weekdays. I will be happy if you understand my situation. :) >>Correct!

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