Good morning Teacher Feye/
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morming!
You look so tired in every morning and i also feel tired every morning. I think we are not early bird style, but you and i have participated in the class without absent until now. It is good!
And.......let me write my homework.
Encounter- Everyday i encounter difficult conversation with foreigners who work in Sahalin, Russia. It makes me stress.
appropriate- Which costume is appropriate in this party?
purpose- What is your purpose in life?
misuse- Somebody misuse their power and bother other people using their position.
I know that i finish my homeworks very late. I dont have a time on weekdays. I will be happy if you understand my situation. :)
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Don't worry I understand your situation. I am glad that you are able to do them during weekend. I think that is good for me. I hope you could do some of them during the weekday so that you will not have a lot to do during the weekend. Yes! I am not an early bird I am more of an afternoon person. I am more productive in the afternoon. But you know I have been doing this for years so I am getting used to it. See you later!
Teacher Faye
Here are your corrections:
Good morming!You look so tired in every morning and i also feel tired every morning.
>>You look tired every morning and I also feel tired in the morning.
I think we are not early bird style, but you and i have participated in the class without absent until now.
>>I think being an early bird is not our style but, we participate in class everyday without an absent.
It is good!
>>I think that is good!And.......let me write my homework.Encounter- Everyday i encounter difficult conversation with foreigners who work in Sahalin, Russia. It makes me stress.
>>I encounter difficult conversations with Russians everyday. It makes me stressed.appropriate- Which costume is appropriate in this party?
>>Which costume is appropriate for this party?purpose- What is your purpose in life?
>>Correct!misuse- Somebody misuse their power and bother other people using their position.
>>Some people misuse their power and bother other people using their position.I know that i finish my homeworks very late.
>>Correct!
I dont have a time on weekdays.
>>I don't have time during weekdays.
I will be happy if you understand my situation. :)
>>Correct!
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