Good morning Tina~!

2012-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi! Good morning Tina. I'm sorry for late my homework. I'm in Busan that my grandmother's house. I was playing with my relatives all day night. We had been going to eat sashimi, and drink beer a lot. It was very fun time. So I'm a little tired now. HA! HA! HA! But homework is important. So I'm doing my homework now. Here is my homework. Fill in the correct question word. 1. Who does sit next to Frank? Clara. 2. Where does the boy come from? He's from Newcastle. 3. How old are her children? They are seven and ten. 4. When is peter's birthday? In April, I think. 5. How much is the shirt? It's twenty pounds.

강사 첨삭

Good Morning James!!!

Happy Friday to you!! I am so happy to read your homework! ^^ 

Yes! You are right. Answering your homework is so important. In constantly doing so, it will help you enhance your English skill. It\'s good that you are having a good time with your relatives. Quality time with your love ones is precious, so take some time and enjoy. You are doing good in our class James. I really appreciate your behavior. It just shows that you are a good and responsible man. 

Just continue learning English with me and I will do my best for you to improve your skills. 

Take care James and Have fun!!! See you later !!!! ^^ 

~~~T.Tina~~~

Hi! Good morning Tina.

>>>Correct!

I\'m sorry for late my homework.

>>>I\'m sorry for doing my homework late. 

I\'m in Busan that my grandmother\'s house.

>>> I am in Busan at my grandmother\'s house. 

I was playing with my relatives all day night.

>>>I\'ve been playing with my relatives all night long. 

We had been going to eat sashimi, and drink beer a lot.

>>>We have been eating Sashimi and we have been drinking beer a lot. 

It was very fun time.

>>>It was such a good time. 

So I\'m a little tired now.

>>>Correct! 

HA! HA! HA!

But homework is important.

>>>But answering my homework is important. 

So I\'m doing my homework now.

>>>Correct! 
 Here is my homework.
Fill in the correct question word.
1. Who does sit next to Frank? Clara.

 >>> Who sits next to Frank? Clara.  

2. Where does the boy come from? He\'s from Newcastle.

>>>Correct! 

3. How old are her children? They are seven and ten.

>>>Correct! 

 4. When is Peter\'s birthday? In April, I think.

>>>Correct! 

5. How much is the shirt? It\'s twenty pounds.

>>>Correct! 


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