Good neighbor
학생이 쓴 원문
Good neighbors mean the one who have a patient.
When people stay at home.
They only have to make a noise.
Like the sound of vacuuming or walking.
Good neighbors need to understand them.
They should try to see a good point of them
and they should forget their bad point.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]ny!
I believe everyone can be good neighbors if both sides learn how to be patient.
Thank you for this!
See you later.
Aki~
Good neighbors mean the one who have a patient.
>>> Good neighbors mean the ones who have patience.
When people stay at home.
>>> CORRECT!
They only have to make a noise.
>>> CORRECT!
Like the sound of vacuuming or walking.
>>> CORRECT!
Good neighbors need to understand them.
>>> CORRECT!
They should try to see a good point of them
>>> They should try to see a good point in them
and they should forget their bad point
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> They should ignore the bad side.
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