good neighbors.

2012-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi, Meshelle. I think, The qualities of a good neighbor is friendly. Unfortunately, I didn't know my neighbors. Becouse they are live monthly rent. Some peple lives longer then a monty. but we didn't meet often. I had very frendly neighbor when I 8 years old. I called her annt. She was university student. We play with dolls every sunday morning. I thought her sometimes. I'm regrttable that don't have neighbor like her.

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Hi there! Thank you for your composition. Here are your corrections.   Hi, Meshelle.>> Hi, Michelle. I think, The qualities of a good neighbor is friendly.>> I think, the quality of a good neighbor is being friendly. Unfortunately, I don\'t know my neighbors. >> Correct. Becouse they are live monthly rent. >> They stay there for just a month. Some peple lives longer then a monty. >> Some live there longer than a month. but we didn\'t meet often.>> Correct.I had very frendly neighbor when I 8 years old.>> I had a very friendly neighbor when I was 8 years old. I called her annt. >> I called her aunt. She was a university student.>> Correct. We play with dolls every sunday morning.>> Correct. I thought her sometimes.>> I think about her sometimes. I\'m regrttable that don\'t have neighbor like her. >> I regret that I don\'t have a neighbor like her now.  

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