good neighbors.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Meshelle.
I think, The qualities of a good neighbor is friendly.
Unfortunately, I didn't know my neighbors.
Becouse they are live monthly rent.
Some peple lives longer then a monty. but we didn't meet often.
I had very frendly neighbor when I 8 years old.
I called her annt. She was university student.
We play with dolls every sunday morning.
I thought her sometimes.
I'm regrttable that don't have neighbor like her.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thank you for your composition. Here are your corrections.
Hi, Meshelle.>> Hi, Michelle.
I think, The qualities of a good neighbor is friendly.>> I think, the quality of a good neighbor is being friendly.
Unfortunately, I don\'t know my neighbors. >> Correct.
Becouse they are live monthly rent. >> They stay there for just a month.
Some peple lives longer then a monty.
>> Some live there longer than a month.
but we didn\'t meet often.>> Correct.I had very frendly neighbor when I 8 years old.>> I had a very friendly neighbor when I was 8 years old.
I called her annt.
>> I called her aunt.
She was a university student.>> Correct.
We play with dolls every sunday morning.>> Correct.
I thought her sometimes.>> I think about her sometimes.
I\'m regrttable that don\'t have neighbor like her.
>> I regret that I don\'t have a neighbor like her now.
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