Good night!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Oh It's terrible
How is your bestfriend now?
She is trying to overcome.
She is comfort you need to comfort your friend.
You are in hershus(???)perfused(?)her fused(?) => help me^0^;;~~
How do you feel?
I will very sad and I will crying whole day.
Me too I will do that.
Is in a patients is ICU?
What are their cases in the ICU?
They can not self breathing or they have a hemorage.
Usually patients in ICU are in a critical condition.
Father of your bestfriend is critical condition.
He is useing oxygen.
What is the reason why a lot of people migrate another country?
I will prepare answer until next monday^^~!
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I was sulf the internet and searched for typhoon in the philippines.
I worried about you.
Did not damage you?
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mi [이름]?Nice composition.Hope you will prepare your answer about the question I gave you. See you.^^
Oh It's terrible
>>>correct sentenceHow is your bestfriend now?>>>correct sentence
She is trying to overcome.
>>>She is trying to overcome it.She is comfort you need to comfort your friend.
>>>She needs comfort. So, you should comfort your friend.You are in hershus(???)perfused(?)her fused(?) => help me^0^;;~~>>>Oh, I think you are confused.
How do you feel?
>>>correct sentenceI will very sad and I will crying whole day.
>>>I will feel very sad and I will cry the whole day.Me too I will do that.
>>>correct sentenceIs in a patients is ICU?
>>>Are there patients in the ICU?What are their cases in the ICU?
>>>What are the cases in the ICU?They can not self breathing or they have a hemorage.
>>>Patients in the ICU need respirator because they cannot breath on their own. Also there are patients who has hemorrhage.Usually patients in ICU are in a critical condition.
>>>correct sentenceFather of your bestfriend is critical condition.
>>>So the fatehr of your bestfriend is in critical condition.He is useing oxygen.
>>>He is using oxygen inhalation.What is the reason why a lot of people migrate another country?>>>What is the reason why a lot of people migrate to another country?
I will prepare answer until next monday^^~!
>>>correct sentence------------------------------------I was sulf the internet and searched for typhoon in the philippines.>>>I surfed the internet and searched about typhoon in the Philippines.
I worried about you.
>>>I was worried about you.Did not damage you?
>>>Were you injured?
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