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2010-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Oh It's terrible How is your bestfriend now? She is trying to overcome. She is comfort you need to comfort your friend. You are in hershus(???)perfused(?)her fused(?) => help me^0^;;~~ How do you feel? I will very sad and I will crying whole day. Me too I will do that. Is in a patients is ICU? What are their cases in the ICU? They can not self breathing or they have a hemorage. Usually patients in ICU are in a critical condition. Father of your bestfriend is critical condition. He is useing oxygen. What is the reason why a lot of people migrate another country? I will prepare answer until next monday^^~! ------------------------------------ I was sulf the internet and searched for typhoon in the philippines. I worried about you. Did not damage you?

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mi [이름]?Nice composition.Hope you will prepare your answer about the question I gave you. See you.^^    Oh It's terrible >>>correct sentenceHow is your bestfriend now?>>>correct sentence She is trying to overcome. >>>She is trying to overcome it.She is comfort you need to comfort your friend. >>>She needs comfort. So, you should comfort your friend.You are in hershus(???)perfused(?)her fused(?) => help me^0^;;~~>>>Oh, I think you are confused. How do you feel? >>>correct sentenceI will very sad and I will crying whole day. >>>I will feel very sad and I will cry the whole day.Me too I will do that.  >>>correct sentenceIs in a patients is ICU?  >>>Are there patients in the ICU?What are their cases in the ICU? >>>What are the cases in the ICU?They can not self breathing or they have a hemorage. >>>Patients in the ICU need respirator because they cannot breath on their own. Also there are patients who has hemorrhage.Usually patients in ICU are in a critical condition.  >>>correct sentenceFather of your bestfriend is critical condition. >>>So  the fatehr of your bestfriend is in critical condition.He is useing oxygen. >>>He is using oxygen inhalation.What is the reason why a lot of people migrate another country?>>>What is the reason why a lot of people migrate to another country? I will prepare answer until next monday^^~! >>>correct sentence------------------------------------I was sulf the internet and searched for typhoon in the philippines.>>>I surfed the internet and searched about typhoon in the Philippines. I worried about you. >>>I was worried about you.Did not damage you? >>>Were you injured?

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